tungazzio's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Crocodile]

Hrmmm

You lost me as soon as the crocodile ate a cheese sandwich and not bacon or a live animal.

aniforce responds:

It used to be in the script that he ate a sandwich with meat and a sandwich with cheese. Though, I took out the meat part. I do not want to encourage the children to eat meat. But funny you'd mention :)

[Angry Dog - Catchphrase]

I liked this one!

Even without your lobster guy, I found this pretty amusing. I especially liked the cephalopod at the end.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks! i think the cephalopod deserves her own spinoff show, what do you think?

[Final Fight:the Nerd Saga]

Just watchable

I basically feel that the plot is very strained, just so that you can have a plot. The animation is quite nice, but I didn't really find the jokes funny. The main thing that kept me interested was the Skies of Arcadia music you put in there. =D

rtil responds:

ok how about this one
yknow how like in sonic you get rings and jump on tv's and you get stuff
but in real life
there are no rings in the sky and if you jump on a tv nothing happens???????
i tried it and it's true LOL

[Aliens Love Dogs!]

It was pretty good.

If you worked carefully on animating it, this could be a great flash. I liked the music at the beginning, but after the dog gets launched it could be a little more intricate. Still, keep singing it, it's fun. The only real problem was the alien dialect - the translation screen was annoying and affected the continuity - subtitling would work better. Nevertheless, it was a good idea, pretty well done and with a bit of work and dedication it could be great!

monkeycat responds:

Thanks, that was the most helpful review I've had yet! Really appreciated!

[Pikmin: Reality Check]

I liked it,

And I disagree. I think the song worked well with what you were trying to show. Nice job.

Kapungo responds:

Thanks. At last, someone who agrees with my choice of music. :D

[Killer Bush 3D]

Well made,

but you need to work on your story and plot, not just the modelling. The models were high quality, but you should work on the voice quality and regularity, the movement of your characters (I know, human movement is the hardest thing to get right), and find a better way to compress it - 13Mb for a short movie isn't gonna work for public Flash. Nevertheless, a commendable effort and overall excellent production.

pyropymp responds:

This was a demo reel for job hunting, not a short film, so story and plot are obviously lacking :P I'd like to complete this in full as I have many ideas where the story can go, but that'll take another 6 months I'm afraid :(

[Solitary Sam Ep.1]

Hmm...

Was nicely drawn, and the sound didn't seem to bad, but nothing happened. Try having a plot.

burnyourflag responds:

Well that depends on what you mean by nothing. i watch cartoons where it's a just a bunch of people getting killed in differant ways. I would call that nothing heppening. But point taken. More characters will be introduced next episode.