Hrmmm
You lost me as soon as the crocodile ate a cheese sandwich and not bacon or a live animal.
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Hrmmm
You lost me as soon as the crocodile ate a cheese sandwich and not bacon or a live animal.
It used to be in the script that he ate a sandwich with meat and a sandwich with cheese. Though, I took out the meat part. I do not want to encourage the children to eat meat. But funny you'd mention :)
I liked this one!
Even without your lobster guy, I found this pretty amusing. I especially liked the cephalopod at the end.
thanks! i think the cephalopod deserves her own spinoff show, what do you think?
Just watchable
I basically feel that the plot is very strained, just so that you can have a plot. The animation is quite nice, but I didn't really find the jokes funny. The main thing that kept me interested was the Skies of Arcadia music you put in there. =D
ok how about this one
yknow how like in sonic you get rings and jump on tv's and you get stuff
but in real life
there are no rings in the sky and if you jump on a tv nothing happens???????
i tried it and it's true LOL
I liked it,
And I disagree. I think the song worked well with what you were trying to show. Nice job.
Thanks. At last, someone who agrees with my choice of music. :D
Well made,
but you need to work on your story and plot, not just the modelling. The models were high quality, but you should work on the voice quality and regularity, the movement of your characters (I know, human movement is the hardest thing to get right), and find a better way to compress it - 13Mb for a short movie isn't gonna work for public Flash. Nevertheless, a commendable effort and overall excellent production.
This was a demo reel for job hunting, not a short film, so story and plot are obviously lacking :P I'd like to complete this in full as I have many ideas where the story can go, but that'll take another 6 months I'm afraid :(
Hmm...
Was nicely drawn, and the sound didn't seem to bad, but nothing happened. Try having a plot.
Well that depends on what you mean by nothing. i watch cartoons where it's a just a bunch of people getting killed in differant ways. I would call that nothing heppening. But point taken. More characters will be introduced next episode.
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