tungazzio's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The New Guy]

I've watched this about 30 times now

It never gets worse! The quality of this is insane, and easily better than pretty much anything else on Newgrounds.

Give me more!

[Mr Shibby 7 Mini Shows 2]

Really good!

I was surprised to see how good this was! Nice work, keep it up!

[Zero's Story 3]

Nice job!

And yay for Secret of Mana!
Just make speech a bit faster and it'll be a little better.

[monkey nab]

It looked pretty good

You just can't tell what's happening, except a few monkeys are getting nicked. I recognised a few sounds in that music from StarTopia n_n

[Pikmin: Reality Check]

I liked it,

And I disagree. I think the song worked well with what you were trying to show. Nice job.

Kapungo responds:

Thanks. At last, someone who agrees with my choice of music. :D

[Valhalla Knights]

That's one pretty good flash

Well drawn, well animated, good timing, nice music choice

Not sure that Valhalla is what you're looking for in this, but meh. I think you have to keep it less pure animé at some points. You can make the animé work, but you need, at times, a little more detail in your artwork. A little rough but careful shading can work wonders.

Of course, I'm picking out the problems and things for you to improve, but I still feel that the movie was well made, and you put a lot of effort into it. Keep it up, and keep improving, and you could make it big.

[Killer Bush 3D]

Well made,

but you need to work on your story and plot, not just the modelling. The models were high quality, but you should work on the voice quality and regularity, the movement of your characters (I know, human movement is the hardest thing to get right), and find a better way to compress it - 13Mb for a short movie isn't gonna work for public Flash. Nevertheless, a commendable effort and overall excellent production.

pyropymp responds:

This was a demo reel for job hunting, not a short film, so story and plot are obviously lacking :P I'd like to complete this in full as I have many ideas where the story can go, but that'll take another 6 months I'm afraid :(

[Blue Block (CLAY)]

Emm...

You need less erratic lighting - have a permanent setting on the camera and use a lamp or whatever. The sound quality is poor and you need to work at putting the characters together so it doesn't sound like a senseless mash. If it was only practice, I won't comment on the plot.

[Country Drunks - Episode1]

Where to start?

Your graphics were nice, your jokes were stupid, pointless, predictable and unfunny, your recordings were low quality, and your title said county, not country.